[Genin] Nara, Eisuke.

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[Genin] Nara, Eisuke.

Post by BrightBlurr on Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:32 pm



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Player Name: BrightBlurr
Character Number: 2
English Proficiency: Native.
Faction/Village: Konohagakure.




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Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi
Nara, Eisuke

BASIC INFORMATION

Name: Nara, Eisuke
Title/Alias:
Age: 16
Gender: Male

Appearance:
At first glance, Eisuke is a strange young man with an even stranger appearance, even when in comparison to his clansmen. The Nara family tends to have young boys who dress in green, a trait Eisuke does pick up from his family. However, the way he dresses, his appearance, and just about anything in regard to appeal is extremely different. Eisuke has soft, brown hair—immediately giving away he inherited more from his mother who was not from the Nara clan. He lets his hair stay a little longer than most boys would, and although it doesn’t seem he looks after it, his hair is actually very soft. Eisuke is tall, and lanky, giving away that he is lazy and does not particularly enjoy working out or anything of the liking. While this isn’t to say he is not well taken care, of it just points out that the extra mile needed isn’t always something he aims for. Eisuke’s dressing style is what stands out about him most, especially because Eisuke dresses for his own comfort, not for appeal from others:

While in Konohagakure; or not on a mission, Eisuke will dress in s a green-shirt, with white lining on the collar, going down to under his arm. This shirt is an unusual shirt, because it is tight, and yet it does show that Eisuke is masculine. He wears a set of black pants under this, with a pair of brown boots that he seems rather fond of. Eisuke usually dresses in this when he is in Konohagakure, on a day off, and not needed at a mission. Anyone who sees him on a day off would refer to it as his ‘napping suit’.
While on a mission: or during team meetings, he tends to wear a black shirt, with a white one overtop, and yet another blue with golden lining shirt overtop of that. Neither of these are long-sleeve, but the black one is turtle-necked. He wears a black belt around his waist, and a set of black pants. The most obvious part of the outfit, however, is the white cloak, wrapped around his shoulders in the initial form of a cape, and spreading down to around his knees. The cape/cloak is one of the ways Eisuke keeps himself from getting cold mid-mission, and it adds the unique bit of flavour that often makes him a little too obvious for a normal ninja. Added plus of being a nice blanket.

Height: 5’10”
Weight: 130lbs
Build: Eisuke is actually a little lanky for a boy. He is tall, thin, and although he does seem to work out, he comes off lanky.
Hair Color & Style: Dark brown, usually slightly longer, just under his chin, or neck. He either keeps it tied back in a small ponytail, or leaves it loose. It doesn’t subtract from his masculinity.
Eye Color: Hazel.

Personality:
Eisuke is in every sense, a true member of the Nara Clan. Beyond his sense in fashion being completely off, and his appearance, hair colour, and hair style never entirely fitting into his surroundings, Eisuke does hold many qualities his clan has. Eisuke is beyond doubt, very intellectual. He often surmises over situations, simply with his thoughts alone, and tends to be very accurate at predicting the outcomes of most things that happen. His undoubted intellect is coupled with by outstanding capabilities, at least, when in regard to being a shinobi, and an even more moral standpoint on the meaning behind being a shinobi. Eisuke spends a lot of his time sharpening his intellect, often believing it to be one of few things that separate him from ordinary shinobi—even despite the bijuu lodged inside of him. He plays chess on a consistent basis, along with shogi on some occasions, if the correct partner decides to join him in his game. He is almost most at ease when he is allowed to play chess, taking the time to use it as a base, later on, for his strategic moves during the missions he might attend. While he is rather well trained in the Nara clan’s trademark shadow manipulation jutsu, his intellectual capabilities are what separate him from the others he might be around in the Nara clan. Prided as as prodigy in terms of thinking, Eisuke is a prized possession on any team, if only solely for his strategic way of life.

However, with the forefront of being a Nara Clan prodigy, Eisuke also was given other traits that undoubtedly added to his already proliferous personage, albeit, some in a negative sense as well. Eisuke often tends to enjoy napping, to the point that he can be seen skipping meetings and other things of the liking to fall asleep somewhere or another. It comes off as lazy, but in actuality, the sleep is one of few things Eisuke can distract the world with. He claims his dreams are full of chess, dango treats, and other nice things that he might doesn’t eat in actuality, to keep his figure from being damaging to his choice of occupation as a ninja. The sleep also serves as a way for him to distract others from things that might make them intimidated by him—particularly, the fact that he does indeed house a jinchuuriki. His motto, since he was much younger, eventually became one of the things people took notice of, about him: “Let’s take an afternoon nap, and think about it later.” Afternoon, usually after lunch, is when Eisuke tends to be seen napping, in a corner of the house, or perhaps even in a grassy field somewhere in Konoha. His method of avoiding the world using sleep, sometimes, belittles others points of view on his abilities as a shinobi, and more importantly, makes him feel he’s more in control of the bijuu inside of him than a jinchuuriki would normally feel, and leaves his days less eventful than most would believe.

Besides afternoon napping, and playing chess, Eisuke does enjoy helping raise deer, although he doesn’t seem to put as much effort into it as he does into other things, like napping. The deer are one of few things Eisuke can find himself leaning towards and wanting to be around, because of their quiet nature. He can also be a rather humorous young lad, especially when put in strangely awkward situations with people. Eisuke can be seen as a socialite. If he is pulled into a conversation, he speaks, and at times rather animatedly, especially when in a situation that is humorous. Naturally, Eisuke is a calm, composed boy. He tends to be serious, and very analytical of most situations, and his reactions are usually always just as serious—but those rare occasions where something humorous happens, can’t be avoided. He is the stereotypical nice guy, with a small bit of a sense of humour, usually in tiny little quips here and there, and really rare jokes. And much unlike most other jinchuuriki, Eisuke tends to laugh at his own mistakes, and even emphasises them, to show others the more normal side to his personality. Eisuke enjoys speaking to people older than himself—normally village elders who are more intelligent. But this is not possible in all occasions, because they are too busy, or reprimand him for always sleeping. Eisuke’s most redeemable quality, is his patience, and his acceptance of others—he does not bother others, and the few times he does attempt to speak to someone who may dislike him, he tries to be most courteous of them.

The Jinchuuriki inside of him, the nine tails, is perhaps the only reason Eisuke has any difficulty with others. While he and the kyuubi do not necessarily speak to one another, and Eisuke tries his best to avoid any interaction with the kyuubi, he still continues to view himself as a monster—even though he was only sealed with the kyuubi to protect the village. Eisuke takes the term ‘monster’ for it’s literal meaning—and he sees himself as a monster, above all. This negative perspective adds onto his views of protecting the village, in the sense that he views the village was untainted. As a monster, his intentions to protect the village, come off stronger than the negative intentions a jinchuuriki may experience from the constant dislike and hatred thrown their way. Eisuke allows the hatred to further motivate him to protect the villagers, and to better himself into not being a bakemono, even if that goal may be impossible. He behaves politely to most villagers—at least in his eyes, although the villagers claim he comes off as lazy and impotent. Eisuke represses most of the negative talk about him, and takes it in a harsh way, using it to become highly self-critical, and forcing himself to further better himself, more and more. This tends to affect his social abilities, and he does not make a pointed effort to interact with others, often preferring his own company over that of even his clansmen, who tend to treat him just as badly for being the sacrificial-jinchuuriki for a demon that plagued the village.

But what profoundly shocks most people, would be his relationship with the kyuubi sealed inside of him. Neither the demon, nor Eisuke, really attempt to speak to one another. Eisuke is often training and attempting to better the strategies he implements into his team situations, and has his shadow ninjutsu to further his goals. The use of the demon fox’s chakra, or even for the matter, anything else it might have to offer, doesn’t further his chances, he believed. Although using the Kyuubi’s abilities would make him much stronger, he holds a strong belief that he should master his own strength, and assert it properly, before even considering asking for help from a source he barely trusts. This lack of a relationship does not stop the Kyuubi from attempting to control him, driving him, at times, to uncontrollable points of anger.

Eisuke is realistically terrified of losing control over the kyuubi. While he hasn’t tapped into its power enough that it could control his abilities, Eisuke has a growing fear of it actually possessing him and slaughtering villagers, leading to his complex as a monster becoming even deeper and more concrete. He does not have nightmares from the demon concerning this, and certainly has never lost control over it, but he does internally attempt at repressing the Kyuubi and any chance to use its abilities, because of this exact reason. While isolating himself from something inside of him was entirely impossible, Eisuke and the Kyuubi have had enough interaction that his intentions of keeping the demon from controlling him remain mutual between him and the Kyuubi. Eisuke maintains his stance on not letting the monster within him from being released, and the Kyuubi retains its life inside of Eisuke. Because the seal is not as strong as most might expect, Eisuke’s fears sometimes emerge when he can’t control the demon, and his lack of experience with it, he often does ‘see’, or rather, hallucinate visions, of losing control and killing others. These hallucinations are brought on by the nine tails, and they leave Eisuke with the urge to further disclose himself from others, to avoid letting that happen again. Besides this, when the demon does happen to take control of him, his personality nearly warps—making him more and more cruel, less prone to the kind personality he usually displays. The Kyuubi’s personality—with the anger, the snideness, and the eventual cruelty shifts over Eisuke’s own. This change in behaviour has only happened once after the initial sealing of the demon--and the clan head had covered the incident up fairly well with excuses--but it had a lasting effect on Eisuke who rembered every moment of it. Eisuke quickly realised that he can’t control the kyuubi, and made it more of a priority to strengthen his resolve.

The most lacking aspect in Eisuke’s life is his family. Because both Takanori and Ayaka passed away when Eisuke was much younger--and since his grandfather was killed during the night of the sealing, he had almost no way to express any sort of feelings for them. He constantly seems to entirely avoid making familial connections, and instead seems more focused on the possibility that his monstrous persona, hidden away behind his sleepy one, should never be let out. Other members of the Nara clan do accept Eisuke, or rather, tolerate him because of his status as a clan member, and also because of his granted, very wide intellect, but there is never the connection of family members between them. Eisuke's closeness to his grandfather had been the most painful thing for him, especially when his grandfather was killed, leaving Eisuke with a huge hole in his life to fill with his shinobi duty. Eisuke seems to externally lock away that he is also family to the other Nara clan shinobi, and attempts to do everything on his own. He rarely thinks of his parents, and the few times he does, it only really serves as motivation to point out that monsters don’t get to keep a family for very long.

Altogether, outwardly, Eisuke is viewed in so many different collaborations of ways. He is both the serious, stern, intellectual genius from a clan that has genius’s born to it in fruition. But he is also the lazy genin that never seems to do anything of useful nature. To villagers, he can be the monster they attempt to condemn for sins that Eisuke has come to experience over the year or so he’s had it sealed in him--and at the same time, the strange boy who always seems to be sleeping. Eisuke’s main goal, however, was always to just find a way to sleep through the life he had been pushed into—“and think about it later.”

FAMILY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION

Known Relatives:
- Nara, Takanori :: Father :: 34, deceased :: Jounin
- Nara, Ayaka :: Mother :: 32, deceased :: Chuunin/House-wife
- Nara, Yasuko :: Grandfather :: 65, deceased :: Retired

Clan:

Nara Clan


History:

July of 1549, just a year before the great war began, little Eisuke Nara opened his eyes to take in the world surrounding him. Eisuke was a child of the Nara clan, born during a time of year considered prestigious to whoever was born—gifted with supposed intelligence and wisdom beyond his years. Eisuke was the son of two Jounin, Takanori and Ayaka Nara. While Ayaka suffered badly during the labouring process and ultimately lost will to be a shinobi, taking up life as a housewife in the Nara clan, again. Eisuke was the pride of his parents—he had his mother’s eyes and hair, but his father’s handsome face and a certain air of even childlike maturity that most attributed to Takanori. Because he was one of two or three Nara children born during that time of year, Eisuke was given much attention, and taught as much as humanly possible for a toddler of his age. He was perhaps the most compliant child that the Nara clan had received, holding traits of both his parents when he was growing up. He was mostly taken care of by his mother, when it came to his cleanliness, his eating habits, and even other things that a baby could only receive from a mother, while Takanori would take Eisuke around the village when he had free time.

Konohagakure was the perfect place to raise a child, especially one of the Nara clan with as much hope as Eisuke had been given. The villagers, although plagued with fear of war, were welcoming and seemed to love being introduced to baby Eisuke, going so far as to even offer him treats and other things of the liking. Eisuke was easily always around his father, enjoying his company over anyone else’s. Because Takanori was every bit as lazy as the rest of the Nara clan men tended to be, Eisuke noticed his habits and began picking up on them. Sitting in the grass for hours on end, napping—one habit Takanori took up when he wanted to avoid being beaten by Ayaka or his mother for avoiding dinner or something of the liking. Little Eisuke, also, tried to copy, granted at the time, he couldn’t walk, so all he did was lay in the grass next to Takanori and stare at him with big, fond, hazel eyes. The first year of Eisuke’s life was spent attempting to understand his father, who only seemed more than happy to return the admiration. Eisuke first sat with his father, while his father and grandfather played a game of chess together, and watched with curious little eyes to see the conclusion of the matches. Eisuke and Takanori were immediately the perfect father-son pairing, and while Takanori rarely said so outloud, he and his wife were incredibly proud of Eisuke’s progress as a child of the Nara clan.

A year passed, and just as Eisuke was attempting to learn to walk, several members of the Nara clan volunteered to fight in the war that was threatening to plague Konohagakure, and Sunagakure by extension. The extent of the war stretched as far as all of the other great ninja nations, and because of this, Takanori, too, went to fight for the Shodaime Hokage and Koonohagakure’s safety. As one of the ninja who were originally stationed at Konohagakure, and later moved to Sunagakure to push offending enemies out of Sunagakure, Takanori was unlikely to ever return home for a visit, let alone come back at the conclusion of the war. Once Takanori was gone, Eisuke was left home with his mother for the most part, only taken places when his grandfather, aging Yasuko, attempted to, which was very rare in itself. Eisuke was only able to observe other people, like his aunts and uncles, or other distant relatives of the same clan. But the lack of a father meant he had more time to watch his mother, who seemed more busy in kitchen life, and other such important things. The war continued for a year, until his mother decided to go join the front lines as well, leaving Eisuke in the hands of his grandfather. This was perhaps the most difficult time of Eisuke’s life, and although he barely remembered it, as a toddler, he cried for much of the time he was there, and Yasuko forced Eisuke to try and learn of the clan’s legacy—failing at times when Eisuke missed his parents too much, specficially Takanori.

By the end of the war, neither of Eisuke’s parents came back, but Takanori did manage to tell a fellow clansmen who came back what he wanted to happen to Eisuke. He asked that Eisuke spend his life serving Konohagakure, for any purpose that might be needed of him. Given the legacy of his father to uphold, Eisuke began to be trained in every sense of his clans jutsu. He was quick to pick up on the knowledge that he was taught, between medical techniques that he knew women were more likely to learn, ranging to learning different tactical things that would help him in his future. Eisuke was thrown into a world where he knew he would have to rise above his own standings, and where he felt like he would have a marvelous impact on his village. By the age of six, Eisuke was learning a lot about shogi and other games that were played using simply thinking and strategies. He was rare to lose to anyone, and even more so than that, he had begun to behave in ways that his father did. For many hours during random times of day, he’d disappear, and be found napping in some corner of the house, often angering the people looking after him. He was beginning to resemble Ayaka in ways, but had of course, more masculine features. The academy was Eisuke’s first traverse into learning jutsu needed for graduating, and also where he met boys his age, who had more motivation than he could manage to muster up. While other boys were training and trying to pick up on common jutsu, Eisuke spent his time sleeping, or reading something, and altogether avoiding doing too much. Even then, while class was in session, and when Eisuke was more or less motivated, he did give correct answers during examinations, and he did learn basic ninjutsu necessary to pass the academy.

His home life became centered on learning the shadow manipulation technique, usually from his grandfather or another aunt or uncle. He was usually very exact, and he followed the instructions without fail (save for a few complaints of wanting to nap). Once given an assignment, he usually accomplished it. Or at least put his entire effort into it. This made him out to be one of the academy’s more intelligent students—but the napping and the way he seemed almost too lazy, often brings his positive aspects to neutral standing. Eisuke seemed to never keep very many friends, instead cantering towards being a loner, who sometimes associated with others. When given free time, Eisuke often read books. As many as he could, on anything he could grasp his head around. The books continued to grow in size and shape as Eisuke’s academy years drew onward, and he tried to keep himself up to date on what had happened in his village’s past, along with as much information as humanly possible on current events in his world. This made him out to be a strange person among his fellow classmates, and yet completely added to his standard as a genius from the Nara clan.

On graduation day, Eisuke was caught sleeping at the back of the school, and dragged to the ceremony by a female teammate who constantly seemed to force him to try and be involved in different things. He graduated and was placed on a team where they thought his intellect would be the most pertinent thing to the team. That would be part of what influenced the rest of his life.

GENIN YEARS


Eisuke’s team would be quick to realise that despite being intelligent, Eisuke was perhaps one of the least motivated people in the team itself. While meetings were scheduled, he’d arrive and try falling asleep when training was important. He was usually quiet, and the few times he gave input, it often turned into a bad attempt at humour on his part, and left the team with knowledge that Eisuke really did need to be pushed to participate in team meetings. However, the few times the team was on a mission and it became difficult, Eisuke did put one hundred percent of his effort into devising a strategy that helped with the situation incredibly. He did put his clans techniques, and the gift of thinking he had been given, to full use, showing that he was by all means the intelligent boy he had been said to be during his years in the academy. While he was a respectable person, Eisuke often took up being comic relief, especially when in regards to the women who might work with him on occasion. Eisuke’s luck with women was nonexistent, and the few that did fall for him, were almost always violent and likely to beat him to death for being lazy.

Eisuke turned fifteen when the kyyubi began its rampage, yet again. The village was in mass chaos, and the Nara clan was called to discuss an immediate solution. While Eisuke was home in the compound when the attack happened, and many of the clan members passed away during the frightening night when a giant fox killed countless people, Eisuke was lucky to survive, and he stayed as close as possible to his grandfather. Eisuke had been terrified that the demon would kill his grandfather.

By the middle of the night, when the moon was at its highest, and the clouds hung low, Eisuke found a group of ninja approaching his grandfather, explaining something about needing a container of some sort. When his grandfather nodded towards Eisuke, who had no idea what was going on, Eisuke was ushered to an area, where the rest of his life changed, unexplicably. Without much of a warning, his grandfather explained that Eisuke was going to have the demon become a part of him for the sake of his village. While Eisuke was too frightened to actually respond back and say no, he let the ritual—the sealing ritual—meant to forever lock a demon inside of him. The seal was perhaps the strangest part of the ordeal, because Eisuke managed to faint sometime during the sealing, and all he could see was red eyes glaring at him from a distance in the darkest parts of his mind. When he woke up a couple hours later, still in the dark night, he was surrounded by the men from earlier, but he could only see red eyes staring at him, and hear heavy panting. This had, essentially, been the moment where Eisuke realized that they had placed the demon inside of him, to protect the village. But moreso than that, Eisuke had become a monster, to protect the people he had been told to protect by his father. Eisuke, in his frightened state, heard laughter, and deep voices, in his mind, and blindly tried to ignore them by screaming for help. The sealing had gone perfectly, but the nine tails, being the most rampant of the tailed beasts, was not something fifteen year old Eisuke knew how to control and keep from possessing his mind. In blinded, half uncontrollable rage and fear, Eisuke attacked the nearest person to him, and without realizing the sudden raise in strength he had, he managed to harm the person seriously—nearly breaking their jaw and dislocating their arm from their body. He was held down by several of the fuuinjutsu ninja at once, and sent unconscious with an anesthetic.

During the two weeks that followed, Eisuke was not allowed outside of a barred room, in fear that he might attack the others. He kept to himself, and saw almost no one from his clan. Plagued with the voice of the nine tail fox, and other things that he wanted to control, Eisuke spent a large amount of time attempting to bash himself unconscious using a wall, and failing miserably because the force he put into it was not enough. The room almost became a jail cell to him, and the rare visitor he had only gave him food and minor advice on how to keep the kyuubi from driving him into insanity. He ended up suffering immense injuries, and by the end of the two weeks, took up the acts of falling asleep to avoid the demon’s insane voice and maddening rage. While awake, the demon whispered words of death and destruction to him, and he was barely able to keep it in check, harming himself and anything he could find in the room. The cyclical pattern he had picked up continued, and his only moments of peace were when he was asleep. Sleep became Eisuke’s safekeep. When the elder council deemed him capable of at least controlling the demon enough to be let out of confinement, Eisuke managed to force himself to go out into public, and straight back to the compound, where he hoped the other clan members might be more understanding of his situation than they had been of the demon itself. To his relief, they had no idea of it, and Eisuke was able to integrate himself into the household. However, when he was told that the night of the rampage, his grandfather mysteriously passed away with a severed arm and several claw markings, Eisuke’s world crashed around him, especially with the realization that his grandfather’s death had been his own doing. With an increased amount of depression weighing down on him, Eisuke spent the next few days lamenting on his own.

When a week had passed by yet again, Eisuke was forced to go speak to the clan head. After talking about the incident with his grandfather, and being told that it was likely no one would know the truth about the demon being sealed inside of him. His future as a member of the Nara clan was still the same—all he had to do was ignore the demon’s temptation and keep it inside of him as long as he was alive, for the sake of protecting everything that his father had once prided him with. Eisuke was forced to pick up the pieces of himself that he had dropped, and the next day, he was sent to a meeting with his team. While his teammates initially saw nothing wrong with Eisuke, and Eisuke picked up part of the actor very well by becoming even more sleepy during missions and altogether being quieter. He continued to be the butt of the humour in the group, usually making situations even more awkward by falling asleep. Only on one occasion, during a mission where the team did not anticipate having a rouge nin group attack them, and Eisuke almost had to watch his teammate get hurt, did he try and interrupt, in the process getting hurt and managing to lose control of the Kyuubi when his emotions were too high. The rampage that followed, and the inevitable release of just one tail, was enough to put frightening damage on anyone nearby, and Eisuke was stopped after their sense knocked him out. The incident was covered up by the head of the Nara clan, and by Eisuke’s instructor, who attributed it to some sort of medicine Eisuke had taken for prior injuries. Since that day onward, Eisuke had stronger control over the demon, and he was even less likely to participate too much in his missions. His laziness, however, did not stop him from inputting in terms of intellect, and he did provide sound help with team strategies, and kept himself from falling behind. Although Eisuke eventually learned to keep from letting his being a jinchuuriki drag him down, and he managed to try and keep it hidden from his teammates (and his sensei, although he still wasn’t sure if his sensei knew about it or not). With the will to continue his life normally, and entirely minimize what being a jinchuuriki could do to him, Nara Eisuke truly set out on the path of a shinobi.

SHINOBI FILE

Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: C-Rank, Genin
Combat Style:
Eisuke’s combat style is a strange one. When in a situation where he is at an advantage, it is likely Eisuke has analysed the battlefield, his opponent, and what chakra and abilities he has, and has managed to implement them in a method that will almost always be successful in helping him achieve victory. Eisuke utilizes jutsu very carefully, using them in senses that will make the environment and his jutsu best utilized. He prefers to keep at a distance, because of his shadow-technique ninjutsu needing slight distance, perhaps mid-range, and using any method possible to get the shadow possession jutsu to be affective. Once a enemy is captured in his shadow possession jutsu, the ultimate ending of the match is concluded, and Eisuke most likely, is sure to win. Eisuke tends to rely on less taijutsu, because he is aware he is not very proficient in it. His strength lies in his speed and his ninjutsu, along with his quick thinking in regard to changing situations. He rarely relies on instinctive movements, always considering his actions before taking them. Usually, to make an enemy fall into a shadow possession jutsu trap, he utilizes jutsu that may require distance, or distracting ninjutsu he may possess. Eisuke is quick in movement (when motivated), and he does not hesitate to run if he needs to put distance between himself and his enemy.

When, however, he is under possession of the nine tail fox, Eisuke’s very abilities shift and change. Normally, he would have thought his attacks out—but in a state of mind where he is angry and focused solely on the negative emotions he might have, Eisuke would likely attack with unending chakra infused ninjutsu. With quicker, more powerful movement, a large amount of his attacks would succeed based solely on the speed of his attacks.

Specialization:

    Primary: Ninjutsu
    Secondary: Kenjutsu

Special Abilities:
Chakra Based

    Katon Proficiency :: C-Rank


Chakra Nature:

    Katon :: Fire Release


Chakra Reserve:
D-Rank Chakra


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Re: [Genin] Nara, Eisuke.

Post by BrightBlurr on Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:35 pm

ARSENAL

INVENTORY

kunai x 10
Exploding tag x 20
Shuriken x 10

JUTSU




B-RANK

    Kageyose no Jutsu :: Shadow Endgame Technique


C-RANK

    Kagemane Shuriken no Jutsu :: Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique
    Kagemane no Jutsu :: Shadow Imitation Technique
    Konoha Kibarashi :: Leaf Distraction
    Ryūka no Jutsu :: Dragon Fire Technique
    Gōkakyū no Jutsu :: Great Fireball Technique
    Hōsenka no Jutsu :: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique


D-RANK

    Kami Shuriken :: Paper Shuriken
    Shunshin no Jutsu :: Body Flicker Technique
    Moesashi no Jutsu :: Ember Technique



E-RANK

    Kawarimi no Jutsu :: Body Replacement Technique
    Kakuremino no Jutsu :: Cloak of Invisibility Technique
    Bunshin no Jutsu :: Clone Technique
    Nawanuke no Jutsu :: Rope Escape Technique
    Henge no Jutsu :: Transformation Technique





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Post by BrightBlurr on Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:16 pm

JINCHUURIKI

KYUUBI :: NINE TAILED FOX


Unique Traits:

    - Detects Negative emotions.
    - Allows user to use Katon, Fūton, and Shakuton release.
    - Turns Jinchuuriki's eyes red.
    - Influences Jinchuuriki most when they are at a negative emotional high (angry, upset, etc.)
    - Gives Jinchuuriki incredible boost in speed.

Chakra Nature

    Fūton :: Wind Release
    Katon :: Fire Release

Advanced Chakra Nature:

    Shakuton :: Scorch Release

Transformations Stages


Initial Jinchūriki Form

Should Eisuke hit an extreme emotional high—any sort of negative emotion—he will enter a state of mind where the Kyuubi’s chakra is released, and he is inclined to go into the initial Jinchuriki form. During this transformation, his eyes turn a piercing red—almost crimson in colour, and it almost seems as if a red shroud begins to form around him. This red shroud is in actuality, just the Kyuubi’s chakra, powering his actions and making him more and more reckless. In this form, Eisuke is granted the Kyuubi’s chakra, and to an extent, begins to take on ‘demonic traits’, this including an almost eerie red glow around his eyes. Eisuke’s behaviour retains nearly the same, but the anger he experiences in this form, and the increase in rage, changes him to behave more aggressively, and visibly, his voice deepens and comes off more rough.

One-Tailed Form

The trigger for this form is almost the same as the initial form, however, it happens when the Jinchuuriki begins to continue experiencing anger, and the negative emotions the Jinchuuriki has becomes more and more powerful. The Jinchuuriki's body is the same as the initial form--piercing red eyes, and visibly red chakra covering the jinchuuriki, however, their voice becomes even more aggressive, and they constantly growl. The tail--one at this point--is formed entirely of visible, red chakra, and shows the increase in chakra being loaned to the Jinchuuriki. In this form, the Jinchuuriki's form is still visible under the chakra.

Two-Tailed Form

This form is rather similar to the one-tailed form--it happens after the first tail sprouts, and an increase in anger, and continual pressure, would force him into the two-tail, except a second chakra tail sprouts behind the jinchuuriki, adding to the loaned chakra, and the chakra becomes thicker, obscuring the Jinchuuriki from view of others around it. The animosity of the Jinchuuriki's actions increases, and they become almost incapable of thinking for themselves. In Eisuke's case, his logic becomes warped, and he begins speaking in a manner that comes off more like the Kyuubi, rather than himself. His voice becomes even deeper, and more gruff. And his language changes, to sound more like an ancient demon speaking, as opposed to a young boy.

Three-Tailed Form

The third tail sprouts, after the second. However, in this form, the thickness of the chakra surrounding the jinchuuriki, becomes redder, and shields away the Jinchuuriki from being seen when moving around. With a significant increase in speed, and an increase in the Jinchuuriki's ability to instinctively guess where negative emotion is headed towards him from, the Jinchuuriki is successfully capable of using the nine tails chakra, and his own is locked away. At this point, the bijuu influenced the Jinchuuriki enough that rational thought is set aside, and the battle that is likely happening will be all the Jinchuuriki can focus on. With their mind closer to the Kyuubi, and the Kyuubi having more access on their actions, the Jinchuuriki, likely, having less control. The Jinchuuriki will walk on all fours.

// FOUR & FIVE SKIPPED.

Six-Tailed Form

By the time the Jinchuuriki approaches the six tail form, they will likely have no control over themselves. The red chakra will entirely cover up and expand the Jinchuuriki's body, nestling them in a bed of chakra, while the physical appearance of a large fox--with bleated black eyes and a monstrous point, but without the snout of a fox, will be what appears on the outside. The Jinchuuriki will not be visible underneath the chakra-covered, almost giant body. A burning, skeletal form of a fox appears to be resting ontop of the jinchuuriki in this form, although the skeletal form has no life. The Jinchuuriki will nearly be in a state of complete rage, and their actions will run entirely on what the kyuubi dictates. Because negative emotion is what will move the jinchuuriki at this point, they will only behave in a manner that is animalistic--this involves attacking anything near them, blindly causing distruction, and only heeding the voice of the Kyuubi, and never being able to stop themselves. If the Kyuubi does allow this form to happen, the Jinchuuriki may have control over themselves, but even that control will be very faint. Even despite the large form this takes on, the Jinchuuriki will likely be very fast, and able to use both their own, and the six-tail form jutsu.

//SEVEN & EIGHT SKIPPED.

Nine-Tailed Form
The nine tail form is closest towards the full form, and perhaps the most dangerous. The large, skeletal form is absorbed by the Jinchuuriki and the Kyuubi's chakra, and nine full tails sprout from behind the jinchuuriki. Now at nearly the massive size the Nine Tails was known to be, and with the snout, ears, and fur of the Kyuubi, the Jinchuuriki is nearly gone, and the Kyuubi has total control over the situation. If the Jinchuuriki were on good terms with the Kyuubi, they could have control, through the Kyuubi, but given the Kyuubi's unlikelihood to be in a positive relationship with its jinchuuriki, the Jinchuuriki would be in a state of unrest, and incapable of doing anything. With glowing red chakra surrounding it, and an almost deathly amount of evil intention around it, this form is closest to the full form, and in any normal situation, too close to the Jinchuuriki losing control of the Kyuubi. With speed that is almost unrivalled, and devestating chakra, the full nine tails are frightening to behold. The Jinchuuriki, if still alive, will be able to still feel what is happening around it. In this form, the Jinchuuriki is also granted the Kyuubi's ability to sense extremely negative emotions--such as hatred, or evil--but may use this as a method of finding who to attack.


Full Form
The full form can either be accessed if the Jinchuuriki is really close to death, and the Kyuubi is close to being released, or if nine subsequent tails are released, and the Jinchuuriki is about to release the Kyuubi. The Kyuubi itself was of monstrous height, with bright orange fur, piercing red eyes, and carnivorous canine teeth. With nine tails that were very long, and massive reach, the Kyuubi has multiple methods of destruction. It's quickness, even with it's large body, and the fire, wind, and scortch jutsu it produces, in this form, are at full power. The Jinchuuriki has no control, and although still present in the Kyuubi, will have no way of stopping it. The Kyuubi's will entirely overpowers it's Jinchuuriki, and with it's massively evil intentions, the Jinchuuriki is unlikely to be an influence on it from here on.


BIJUU JUTSU


Initial Jinchūriki Form

Kitsunekasai :: Fox Fire
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Name: Kitsunekasai :: Fox Fire
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Katon
Description:
In the Initial Form, the Jinchuuriki can utilize the Kyuubi's chakra to create a flash fire effect. A blue, ethereal flame appears from no where with a mere single hand sign. The flame bursts forth wildly, licking in all directions and causing harm to anyone that is near, friend or foe. There is no controlling the directionality of the flame, but it is an intense jutsu and happens in the blink of an eye.



Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.

1-Tailed Form


Tailed Beast Chakra Arms
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Name: Tailed Beast Chakra Arms
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Neutral
Description:
This is an ability a jinchūriki is able to perform when in a tailed form. The jinchūriki will use the raw chakra of the their Tailed Beast to form arms, which they can freely manipulate to attack their foes, able to strike an opponent faster than even a Sharingan user can react to. The chakra arms hands are clawed while the rest of the arm seems to lack any kind of joint, thus allowing them to have flexible movements that will generally be impossible for normal arms. The user can create any number of arms that they desire and they can also serve other purposes such as grappling hooks, to either grab onto objects or enemies from great distances, to offensive means, as merely touching one of these can cause fatal burns, due to the Nine-Tails' seething hatred within its chakra (though this is not always the case). Due to having chakra attached to his body, the chakra arms can grow in size and from the fourth tail up, the jinchuuriki, the arms, or any part of his body can divide into two or more fully operational appendages.


Mazu Honō :: First Flame
Spoiler:

Name: Mazu Honō :: First Flame
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Katon
Description:
The first of a series of powerful flame jutsu, the Jinchuuriki can use when in the tailed-forms. The end of the first tail is covered in a blue ethereal flame, by this jutsu. From the flame arcs a large ball of fire that wisps around a radius of 5 meters from the origin point, seeking to run into anything and set it ablaze. The flame seems to have a mind of its own, as it is being controlled by the Kyuubi itself and not the Jinchuuriki.

Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.

2-Tailed Form


Daini Honō :: Second Flame
Spoiler:

Name: Daini Honō :: Second Flame
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Katon
Description:
The Second of a series of powerful flame jutsu, the Jinchuuriki can use when in the tailed-forms. The ends of the two tails are covered in a blue ethereal flame, by this jutsu. From the flames arc several large wisps of fire that shoot around a radius of 5 meters from the origin point, seeking to run into anything and set it ablaze. The flames seems to have a mind of their own, as they is being controlled by the Kyuubi itself and not the Jinchuuriki.

Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Spoiler:

Name: Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid - Long
Element: Fūton
Description:
Grand Gale is a technique that utilizes the Kyuubi's Wind affinity. Concentrating a large amount of its chakra into its mouth, it releases a battering gust of wind that pushes a wide range of targets back. It has the power to crush an opponent against a rooted object such as a cliff side and can blow entire trees over with one fell swoop. The gust will not start directly in front of the casting point at full power. Rather, it takes a range of 5 meters before it reaches its full power and will carry on for a maximum range of 12 meters.

Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.

3-Tailed Form

Honōkokoro Furōkabā :: Blaze Spirit Shroud
Spoiler:

Name: Honōkokoro Furōkabā :: Blaze Spirit Shroud
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Shakuton
Description:
This jutsu utilizes the Kyuubi's chakra in order to harness its natural Scorch-Nature affinity. In the Three-Tailed form, the Jinchuuriki summons 6 levitating orbs of intense heat that surround them. These orbs will follow the Jinchuuriki around at all times, creating a sort of parameter around them. If an opponent happens to get close enough to the Three-Tailed Fox form, these orbs will lash out with incredible heat, burning the target in an instant. However, once they are summoned they will slowly begin to dissipate over a period of time.

Daisan Honō :: Third Flame
Spoiler:

Name: Daisan Honō :: Third Flame
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Katon
Description:
The third of a series of powerful flame jutsu, the Jinchuuriki can use when in the tailed-forms. The ends of the three tails are covered in a blue ethereal flame, by this jutsu. From the flame arcs several large wisps of fire that shoot around a radius of 7 meters from the origin point, seeking to run into anything and set it ablaze. The flames seems to have a mind of their own, as they is being controlled by the Kyuubi itself and not the Jinchuuriki.


Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Spoiler:

Name: Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid - Long
Element: Fūton
Description:
Grand Gale is a technique that utilizes the Kyuubi's Wind affinity. Concentrating a large amount of its chakra into its mouth, it releases a battering gust of wind that pushes a wide range of targets back. It has the power to crush an opponent against a rooted object such as a cliff side and can blow entire trees over with one fell swoop. The gust will not start directly in front of the casting point at full power. Rather, it takes a range of 5 meters before it reaches its full power and will carry on for a maximum range of 12 meters.

Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.

6-Tailed Form

Dairoku Honō :: Sixth Flame
Spoiler:

Name: Daisan Honō :: Third Flame
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close - Mid
Element: Katon
Description:
The sixth of a series of powerful flame jutsu, the Jinchuuriki can use when in the tailed-forms. The ends of the six tails are covered in a blue ethereal flame, by this jutsu. From the flames arc several large wisps of fire that shoot around a radius of 9 meters from the origin point, seeking to run into anything and set it ablaze. The flames seems to have a mind of their own, as they is being controlled by the Kyuubi itself and not the Jinchuuriki.

Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Spoiler:

Name: Sōdai Shippū no Jutsu :: Grand Gale Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid - Long
Element: Fūton
Description:
Grand Gale is a technique that utilizes the Kyuubi's Wind affinity. Concentrating a large amount of its chakra into its mouth, it releases a battering gust of wind that pushes a wide range of targets back. It has the power to crush an opponent against a rooted object such as a cliff side and can blow entire trees over with one fell swoop. The gust will not start directly in front of the casting point at full power. Rather, it takes a range of 5 meters before it reaches its full power and will carry on for a maximum range of 12 meters.

Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.



Full Bijuu Form (9-Tailed Form)

Jigoku Shakunetsu :: Scorching Inferno
Spoiler:

Name:Jigoku Shakunetsu :: Scorching Inferno
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: Shakuton
Description:
Utilizing its natural Scorch affinity, the Kyuubi creates a flash fire that erupts from beneath it, covering its entire body in searing flames. The heat that emanates from the Kyuubi is so intense that merely standing within 3 meters of it will produce burns and evaporate water. Any normal person who touches the Kyuubi at this point is likely to die as the water in their body evaporates. With this jutsu the Kyuubi can then rampage and thrash about, destroying anything in its path. The jutsu only lasts 15 seconds after which the Kyuubi itself will be in great pain, though because of its natural helaing abilities this weakness will not last long.



Kitsune Jigoku :: Fox Inferno
Spoiler:

Name:Kitsune Jigoku :: Fox Inferno
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Katon
Description:
The fully transformed Kyuubi spews an intense flame from its mouth that encircles it, burning with the great desire to murder all those standing in the Kyuubi's path. The flames arc high into the sky and effectively create an offensive barrier. This means that the perimeter covers the fox almost like a shield while still burning anything it touches. The jutsu can lash out in a certain direction if the fox wishes it and can engulf an entire mountain given enough chakra is used.

Daikyū Honō :: Ninth Flame
Spoiler:

Name:Daikyū Honō :: Ninth Flame
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Katon
Description:
The final jutsu in a series of flame jutsu the Jinchuuriki can use when in the tailed forms. The Kyuubi's nine tails erupt with a blue ethereal flame. The Kyuubi then whips its tails back and forth, which generates a rushing torrent of flame that spreads outward from its current position and engulfs anything in a radius of 11 meters. The flames or relentless and will burn all that they touch. Their white-hot nature blinds those who look directly into them as well. After a few seconds the flames will dissipate.

Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Spoiler:

Name:Yūrei Endama Maboroshi :: Ghost Flame Spirit Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Element: Yin
Description:
An illusion cast by the Kyuubi on those who look directly at the forming tails, this jutsu can be used at all transformation levels. It is not activated automatically and the Jinchuuriki will a flow in chakra when the Kyuubi does activate it. Furthermore, when in the Initial Form, the Kyuubi can only cast the Genjutsu when the Jinchuuriki is weaving hand signs. In the other forms it may cast it freely. The illusion makes all those in range see wisping flames surrounding the Jinchuuriki, themselves, and a vast radius around them. The flames seem to float in the air and dance back and forth, adding to the mesmerizing effect. The goal of the Genjutsu is to get opponents and those around to follow a dancing flame, focusing entirely on it, so that the second part of the illusion can take place. Once the affected targets look away, an Illusion of the fully release, Nine Tailed Fox appears where the Jinchuuriki stands. The illusion masks the actual Jinchuuriki to those that look at it and thus the giant fox will move with the Jinchuuriki. It is a hard illusion to see through but since the Jinchuuriki is actually as large as the Kyuubi if someone were to touch or attack it they would feel the lack of mass and thus break the Genjutsu for themselves only. A Kai(Release) technique can break this for others but like all genjutsu, the person most first realize they are caught in one.
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Re: [Genin] Nara, Eisuke.

Post by BrightBlurr on Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:03 am

Okay, I'm done. Someone can look it over now.
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Re: [Genin] Nara, Eisuke.

Post by Methedor on Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:41 pm

Very good! There are a few typos like some orphan letters in the second paragraph of appearance. Your Jutsu is also supposed to be in spoiler tags under their respective ranks. Aside from these minor things, you get the First of Two approvals.


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Approved 2/2

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