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Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by Eden Shinteki on Mon Aug 26, 2013 12:15 am

Name: Kakure Yōshiki: Samazamana Eikyō :: Hidden Style: Various Impacts
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Does not require handseals. Eden charges raiton chakra to any limb attached to her body and hits the target or defends against her target. This name was given to the style because the strikes are independent of one another, meaning that combinations and such are not a necessity for this technique. Eden can throw a punch and then randomly use a reverse-sided spinning heel kick. This "overseeing" series of strikes requires a minimum Advanced Strength and Advanced Speed in order to use it. These various strikes may likely cause a knockback effect, as well as a dazing effect due to the raw power of them. The raiton chakra will cause an added numbness effect to the area of the opponent's body that is hit (numbness lasts for 2 posts). In terms of defensive techniques like blocking, the raiton chakra increases the defensive power of these blocks and may numb the target's attacking limb (numbness lasts for 2 posts). This jutsu also can work in conjunction with Raiton no Yoroi.

Name: Mazu Hanji: Yonshi no Eikyō :: First Judge: Four-Finger Impact
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Requires no handseals. Requires at least Advanced Strength. Requires the activation of Raiton no Yoroi. Eden concentrates raiton chakra to her hand and points toward the opponent with four of her fingers with either hand. The chakra stretches outward from the tips of her fingers, with the end tip of the said chakra being rounded. Due to the density of the chakra, it has the potency to blow apart an enforced B-rank Doton wall, therefore, it is extremely lethal. Each decrease in finger count exponentially increases the raw destructive power of the technique. This is the first of four techniques.

Name: Ni Hanji: Sanshi no Eikyō :: Second Judge: Three-Finger Impact
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Requires no handseals. Requires at least Advanced Strength. Requires the activation of Raiton no Yoroi. Eden concentrates raiton chakra to her hand and points toward the opponent with three of her fingers with either hand. The chakra stretches outward from the tips of her fingers, with the end tip of the said chakra being rounded but getting slightly more pointed. Due to the density of the chakra, it has the potency to blow apart multiple enforced B-rank Doton walls in succession. Therefore, it is extremely lethal. Each decrease in finger count exponentially increases the raw destructive power of the technique. This is the second of four techniques.

Name: Dai San Hanji: Ni Yubi no Eikyō :: Third Judge: Two-Finger Impact
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Requires no handseals. Requires at least Advanced Strength. Requires the activation of Raiton no Yoroi. Eden concentrates raiton chakra to her hand and points toward the opponent with two of her fingers with either hand. The chakra stretches outward from the tips of her fingers, with the end point being much more noticeably pointed. Due to the density of the chakra, it has the potency to blow apart an enforced A-rank Doton wall. Therefore, it is extremely lethal. Each decrease in finger count exponentially increases the raw destructive power of the technique. This is the third of four techniques.

Name: Raijin-sha Kanadzuchi :: Thunder God's Hammer
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Requires no handseals. Requires at least Advanced Strength. Requires the activation of Raiton no Yoroi. This technique is a combination of raw destructive power and speed in order to create a large Area of Effect. Eden runs at top speed while in Raiton no Yoroi and jumps high into the air. While in the air, she winds back either her right or left arm and charges the raiton armor again throughout her body, thus then charging straight toward the ground and unleashing an extremely powerful Area-of-Effect shockwave with her body as the epicenter. This technique has the potency to induce a very large crater and send shinobi and debris alike through the air, causing major damage to all in the immediate area.

Kesshō Hanji: Ippon'yubi no Eikyō :: Final Judge: One-Finger Impact
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Name: Kesshō Hanji: Ippon'yubi no Eikyō :: Final Judge: One-Finger Impact
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu + Taijutsu
Element: Raiton
Range: Hand-to-hand
Description: Requires no handseals. Requires at least Advanced Strength. Requires the activation of Raiton no Yoroi. Eden concentrates raiton chakra to her hand and points toward the opponent with just one finger of either hand. The chakra stretches outward from the tip of her finger, with the end point being completely pointed, like that of a Chinese straight sword. Due to the density of the chakra, it has the potency to blow apart multiple enforced A-rank Doton walls and can even blow a human-sized hole through an S-rank Doton wall, due to the extreme concentration of raiton chakra in the one finger. Therefore, it can prove to be fatal if it is taken as a direct hit. This is the last of the four techniques. This final judge technique may only be utilized four times per topic.


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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by AaronW on Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:48 am

Kakure Yōshiki: Samazamana Eikyō :: Hidden Style: Various Impacts
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Mazu Hanji: Yonshi no Eikyō :: First Judge: Four-Finger Impact
I see that these next few jutsu have heavy influence from the Third Raikage's jutsu. I have no problem with this so long as you remember to make them your own. They aren't identical so it's fine. Just wanted to point it out.
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Ni Hanji: Sanshi no Eikyō :: Second Judge: Three-Finger Impact
Dai San Hanji: Ni Yubi no Eikyō :: Third Judge: Two-Finger Impact
Kesshō Hanji: Ippon'yubi no Eikyō :: Final Judge: One-Finger Impact
You've made both the first and second portions of these jutsu-series C-ranks. I would consider this one a B-rank in my own opinion, and thus increasing the rank of the others in accordance with this. Now, this means you wouldn't be able to start with the last one (since it would be an S) but you could certainly train for it right away. We shall see what outlaw has to say about the second through last ones on the rank matter.

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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by Eden Shinteki on Mon Aug 26, 2013 12:23 pm

If that is the case, I will go ahead and change the ranks of the last three of the series so it would descend chronologically while the rank ascends chronologically: C, B, A, S.

I would like to get them approved and get the S-rank approved for training.

Also, I shall make a 5th custom jutsu as the S-rank requires training after approval.
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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by AaronW on Mon Aug 26, 2013 12:41 pm

That should all be fine. Just make sure to post the proper training for your second S rank when the time comes. I am sure outlaw will get to these soon.

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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by Eden Shinteki on Mon Aug 26, 2013 12:52 pm

Alright, the post is now updated. Ready for the rest of the grading.
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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by AaronW on Mon Aug 26, 2013 1:07 pm

Your new tech gets the first of two approvals pending the translation of the name accompany it as well. The rest of the techs also receive the first approval on my end.

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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by Eden Shinteki on Mon Aug 26, 2013 1:08 pm

Whoops. Translation added.
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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by gundamoutlaw on Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:26 pm



Approval 2/2

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Re: Eden's 5 Custom Techniques

Post by Eden Shinteki on Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:44 pm

I shall start training the S-rank as soon as I am approved.
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