Kaizu Raiton Jutsu (Done)

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Kaizu Raiton Jutsu (Done)

Post by Kaizu on Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:39 pm

Name: Fūjin no te - Hand of the Wind god
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Raiton
Description: Created by Kaizu himself, this technique forces a large amount of raiton chakra to be focused into the palm of the user's hand. Once the raiton is manifested into the user's hand, the user charges forward and thrusts the Chidori into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces. This technique, though valuable, has a significant draw back. Due to the speed required, the user can get 'tunnel visioned'. This allows for the enemy to counter the Chidori. Due to the tunnel vision, the user would be unable to evade the attack in normal instances. Thus, Godly Evade or Sharingan is required in order to overcome this hindrance.

Name: Fūjin no ōra- Aura of the Wind god
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to Mid
Element: Fuuton
Description:Developed by Kaizu Uzumaki while creating Chidori. By releasing the Chidori in every direction, an electrical discharge flows from the user's entire body allowing him to affect multiple enemies. When using this attack on a great number of enemies at once, it can effectively double as an instant defence. The body of the person touched by the Chidori will misinterpret the lightning nature as "electrical signals from the nerves", making its muscles contract. This causes the body to involuntarily go stiff, while at the same time receives damage. This attack can also be channelled through the ground to increase the range of the attack.

Name: Fūjin no ken- Sword of the Wind god
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: Fuuton
Description: This technique allows Kaizu to channel Chidori through a blade of his choosing. This makes it nearly unblockable as the radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, if an opponent is stabbed, their body goes numb due to an electrical current which causes the muscles to contract, making it impossible for the opponent to move. However, it can be countered by other weapons that also utilise Lightning Release chakra flow.

Name: Fūjin no jūsei- Gunshot of the Wind god
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to Mid
Element: Fuuton
Description: This is one of many variations of the Chidori that uses shape transformation. It is specialised in more speed, by being transformed into countless sharp senbon, all aimed at the enemy. By increasing the amount of chakra used, the number of senbon also increases. These senbon; like Chidori Sharp Spear, are less powerful than Chidori itself. They are, however, extremely deadly none the less.

Name: Fūjin no yari- Spear of the Wind god
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to Mid range
Element: Fuuton
Description:This technique uses shape transformation to form the original Chidori into a spear or blade-shape, adapting it for mid-range attacks with a maximum range of about five metres. Although it's less powerful than the Chidori, its increased range means there is less of a risk to the user. It also has the advantage of being able to be used for surprise attacks and capturing.
When the enemy's body is pierced, the user can alter the spear's shape into multiple additional blades, increasing the number of wounds. The blade can also be swung in order to cut things as well as cause fatal injuries. Kaizu can focus this technique through any blade he wishes.

Name: Fūjin no keshin- Incarnation of the Wind god
Rank: S
Type: Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Element: Fuuton
Description:


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Re: Kaizu Raiton Jutsu (Done)

Post by Kaizu on Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:36 pm

Done
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Re: Kaizu Raiton Jutsu (Done)

Post by gundamoutlaw on Sat Aug 31, 2013 12:13 am

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Re: Kaizu Raiton Jutsu (Done)

Post by AaronW on Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:06 am

Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Chidorigatana- Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana - Other than other lightnint release being able to block this, you also need to stick with the natural flow of elemental weaknesses. Thus, wind releases need to be able to overcome this in summer manner. That goes for all lightning jutsu, not just yours included but it would be particularly good of you to write that into this descrption since it seems that nothing can overcome it other wise.

Chidori Senbon - Make this a B-Rank.

Chidori Eisō- Chidori Sharp Spear
- He wouldn't be able to focus this through ANY blade. Make sure it states any blade that conducts chakra. The metal might conduct electricity itself, but this is far different than naturally occurring electricity and if it were just a normal blade he wouldn't be able to control the jutsu from it.

I don't mind you owning these techniques, but I notice the mention of the Sharingan in the description of the first one and various other notions where copy/paste is evident. Please just go through and delete/change/edit those and these will be fine with me. Basically what I am asking is to make it read like it actually is Kaizu's jutsu. I don't want these to be the exact same as the Sasuke versions for two reasons: One, that is boring and two, some of them are overpowered in that sense. Not too many changes here so just make those and you can get the 2nd approval.

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