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Mummification wrapping

Post by Jojo Kaguya on Mon Sep 09, 2013 5:17 am


Name: Mīra-ka no orikaeshi [Mummification wrapping]
Classification: Armor/Defensive Tool
Rank: A
User: Jojo Kaguya [A-Rank]
Special Properties: The properties of these three wrappings are simple. Each wrapping must be in a certain spot on the body, those being the chest, hip, and lastly the left forearm. Each of these wrappings considerably have a give of their own, and each gift requires a different amount of chakra to maintain and there in use.

  • Chest: This spot is to cover up, and that is it. Jojo being known for her larch dance, utilizes this strand of cloth to cover herself up with its regenerative properties so that mild flashing is about all there is known to man, nothing beyond. The chakra input for this is minimal to null. *This is to help the censors*
  • Hip: Another spot only utilized to cover up, much like the chest, this spot is used just for those times when one just can't get anything to fit at all, allowing the hip cloth to adjust to size no matter the person. Chakra input being minimal to null as well. *This is to help the censors*
  • Left Forearm: This spot is unique, as the left forearms spot is ideally used to create a small buckler shield with incredible defensive potential as the chakra input is B rank in nature. The defensive properties of this allow one to block against physical attacks up to C rank in nature without damaging the cloth. Fire, water, and lightning chakra attacks can nullify this shield in just a single strike no matter what rank. The shield with minimal impact damage blocks Earth and wind up to D rank attacks. Anything higher than anything said above renders the left arm's shield useless for three rounds, making it just normal covering wrap.
  • Unify: A single style of the wrappings allows them to completely enclose the user inside the mummification wrapping, and as such this can only be activated by ally's who pour their own chakra into the strands. It mummifies the user for a short time, restraining them no matter how strong, fast, or evasive the user is. The ally does this for force the user of the Mummification wrapping into an induced meditative state. To render this move, the ally must be able to utilize A rank techniques so to pour A rank chakra into the wrappings. Those who qualify as allies, are family members and those whom Jojo/the user deems such by letting them know about the actual technique itself. Jojo herself cannot use the trait “Unify”, only other PC's (not NPC's) can use this move.

Description: These wrappings are just like what you would see on mummies in tombs and such. The width of each one being one and three-hundred-forty-five thou [1.345 inch] while the lengths of them are just three long strands of cloth. The strands' location utilizes the three main areas, as these are not in use for offensive capabilities but rather a more subtle reasoning behind them. Seeing as they are chakra filled bandages, the wrappings themselves drain little chakra to utilize their talents and properties while initially they are formidably the same no matter what. Each strand is ten feet, each one having originated from the same fabric as a mummified shinobi. Having been such a legend these wrappings precariously are of a yellowed white color of aged burlap. In reality, the wrappings made just for Jojo to learn to train by being patient, to calm her mind in the harshest of days, and inevitably to learn patience.


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Re: Mummification wrapping

Post by AaronW on Mon Sep 09, 2013 8:08 am

Check your spelling and grammar across the board. The first and second line in Special Properties. The second line mentions 'give' but I think you meant gift. Just give it a once over. Other than that this is good to go on my end, we will see what Outlaw has to say. Neat addition.

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Re: Mummification wrapping

Post by Jojo Kaguya on Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:54 pm

Alrighty, did the grammar edits
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Re: Mummification wrapping

Post by gundamoutlaw on Mon Sep 09, 2013 7:11 pm

Each of these wrappings considerably have a give of their own, and each gift requires a different amount of chakra to maintain and there in use.
Pretty sure that's supposed to be GIFT, not GIVE. Other then that, nice job.


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